In which Maou is actually a pretty bad dude eh mind controls peopel and doesn’t afraid of anything
Putting aside the story, I feel I should comment that the editing from this is from Super Shanko and katsugawa, who were commissioned to edit it by GuroLover12. I’ve had a translated script for this sitting around for a while, but due to the difficulty of the editing, hadn’t really found someone to pick it up. GuroLover12 wanted to see this scanlated enough to commission some editing, so be sure to extend your thanks to him on the e-hentai gallery if you enjoyed it.
In which Ryou and Hime discover true friendship. The friendship of being human sex toys.
You may or may not have already seen a scanlation of this story floating about, and I’m going to be perfectly honest here; CGrascal didn’t actually do a bad job on it from the view of accurate translation. The problem is that the proofing of that script is nonexistent, so it’s riddled with typos and bad grammar, and the editing of it is just horrendous. Given that I rather liked this story, I figured I’d pick it up when there was interest expressed in doing another version over on LWB.
To be concise, the translation isn’t going to be terribly different (although more polished, yes). However, I can say without any doubt that the editing that Colderly from LWB did is vastly superior to the other release. So, if you haven’t read it already, or even if you have, please enjoy this edition.