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mindbrokenPretend Play [Neromasin]

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Joint with Little White Butterflies.

In which Ryou and Hime discover true friendship. The friendship of being human sex toys.

You may or may not have already seen a scanlation of this story floating about, and I’m going to be perfectly honest here; CGrascal didn’t actually do a bad job on it from the view of accurate translation. The problem is that the proofing of that script is nonexistent, so it’s riddled with typos and bad grammar, and the editing of it is just horrendous. Given that I rather liked this story, I figured I’d pick it up when there was interest expressed in doing another version over on LWB.

To be concise, the translation isn’t going to be terribly different (although more polished, yes). However, I can say without any doubt that the editing that Colderly from LWB did is vastly superior to the other release. So, if you haven’t read it already, or even if you have, please enjoy this edition.